my teams new jersey design, whaddaya think?

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  • PsychoMag
    the Franchise baller
    • Jul 2001
    • 906

    #1

    my teams new jersey design, whaddaya think?

    i am looking for some constructive criticism here.



    the outer color is solid black now, and the explicit logo is a bit smaller.. and a lil lower on the jersey.. the revised version is 554meg, so i cant upload it, but what do you think of the concept?
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  • Pyroboy597
    We need more room for titl
    • May 2004
    • 518

    #2
    Looks more like a basketball jersey to me :/ It needs something.. some kind of design that runs throughout it... All the black space is kinda meh..
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    • PsychoMag
      the Franchise baller
      • Jul 2001
      • 906

      #3
      yea im thinkin of adding something to the emptiness
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      • magman007
        I <3 my Penis
        • Jun 2001
        • 7579

        #4
        damn dude! looks sweet!

        btw dude, hows it going? i havnt seen you around in a grip. Shoot me a pm.



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        • latches109

          #5
          I like the text. The picture of the girls suck. Very 80's. The girl could work if you eliminated the second (back) one. kinda like this. Still very empty.

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          • Dharma punk
            Registered User
            • Jan 2006
            • 209

            #6
            ^^^ losing the secondgirl is a HUGE improvement

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            • GT
              Automag?
              • Dec 2001
              • 5786

              #7
              I am not sure if that is something you want on a jersey. I always liked the explict lyrics symbol on cd.s give that a try?
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              • UTDragun
                Tennessee Paintvols
                • Feb 2005
                • 1052

                #8
                looks like an emo team jersey lol
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                • SummaryJudgement
                  Selling stuff, good stuff.
                  • Aug 2004
                  • 1944

                  #9
                  You may want to consider how it may affect the marketablilty of your team.....just a thought.....

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                  • Cow hunter
                    300fps=204.54mph
                    • Aug 2005
                    • 1521

                    #10
                    Originally posted by GT
                    I am not sure if that is something you want on a jersey. I always liked the explict lyrics symbol on cd.s give that a try?
                    i second that idea

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                    • lopxtc
                      Unix Geek
                      • Oct 2001
                      • 2706

                      #11
                      Like cheating, fighting, bad language, getting blasted drunk and making an *** of yourself is better?

                      Sortta like the GTA thing .... you can kill cops, steal cars, kill civilians ... but dont you dare have consensual sex with another adult LOL ....

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                      Originally posted by SummaryJudgement
                      You may want to consider how it may affect the marketablilty of your team.....just a thought.....
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                      • WARPED1
                        I'm a pirate, ARRRRRRRRRR!
                        • Nov 2001
                        • 7458

                        #12
                        What style play is your team? Tourney/XBall? If so, very nice, it DOES need more in the empty black area. Maybe wisps of smoke or lightning?
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                        • Temo Vryce
                          Super Chicken
                          • Sep 2001
                          • 1023

                          #13
                          Personally I don't like it. Mind you, I don't like half naked women advertising paintball products either. Don't get me wrong I love women, I just don't think that type of advertising belongs in paintball. Cars, Trucks, or Motorcycles, sure. Paintball, not for me.

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                          • WARPED1
                            I'm a pirate, ARRRRRRRRRR!
                            • Nov 2001
                            • 7458

                            #14
                            Originally posted by Temo Vryce
                            Personally I don't like it. Mind you, I don't like half naked women advertising paintball products either. Don't get me wrong I love women, I just don't think that type of advertising belongs in paintball. Cars, Trucks, or Motorcycles, sure. Paintball, not for me.
                            Are you kidding?! PB needs more scantily clad women to advertise!
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                            • PsychoMag
                              the Franchise baller
                              • Jul 2001
                              • 906

                              #15
                              Originally posted by WARPED1
                              What style play is your team? Tourney/XBall? If so, very nice, it DOES need more in the empty black area. Maybe wisps of smoke or lightning?
                              We play D2 5/7man GPL. Some NPPL. I dont think anyone is concerned with "image" since we are a great group of guys, compared to the typical sore losers who usually curse, argue, fight, cheat, etc... the jersey is just because it can be done, never seen before, and we have sponsors who like it. If and When the time comes, obviously we will tone the graphic nature of the jersey down a bit for commercialism...
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