my teams new jersey design, whaddaya think?

[PsychoMag]

i am looking for some constructive criticism here.



the outer color is solid black now, and the explicit logo is a bit smaller.. and a lil lower on the jersey.. the revised version is 554meg, so i cant upload it, but what do you think of the concept?

[Pyroboy597]

Looks more like a basketball jersey to me :/ It needs something.. some kind of design that runs throughout it... All the black space is kinda meh..

[PsychoMag]

yea im thinkin of adding something to the emptiness

[magman007]

damn dude! looks sweet!

btw dude, hows it going? i havnt seen you around in a grip. Shoot me a pm.

[latches109]

I like the text. The picture of the girls suck. Very 80's. The girl could work if you eliminated the second (back) one. kinda like this. Still very empty.

[Dharma punk]

^^^ losing the secondgirl is a HUGE improvement

[GT]

I am not sure if that is something you want on a jersey. I always liked the explict lyrics symbol on cd.s give that a try?

[UTDragun]

looks like an emo team jersey lol

[SummaryJudgement]

You may want to consider how it may affect the marketablilty of your team.....just a thought.....

[Cow hunter]

I am not sure if that is something you want on a jersey. I always liked the explict lyrics symbol on cd.s give that a try?

i second that idea

[lopxtc]

Like cheating, fighting, bad language, getting blasted drunk and making an *** of yourself is better?

Sortta like the GTA thing .... you can kill cops, steal cars, kill civilians ... but dont you dare have consensual sex with another adult LOL ....

Aaron

You may want to consider how it may affect the marketablilty of your team.....just a thought.....

[WARPED1]

What style play is your team? Tourney/XBall? If so, very nice, it DOES need more in the empty black area. Maybe wisps of smoke or lightning?

[Temo Vryce]

Personally I don't like it. Mind you, I don't like half naked women advertising paintball products either. Don't get me wrong I love women, I just don't think that type of advertising belongs in paintball. Cars, Trucks, or Motorcycles, sure. Paintball, not for me.

[WARPED1]

Personally I don't like it. Mind you, I don't like half naked women advertising paintball products either. Don't get me wrong I love women, I just don't think that type of advertising belongs in paintball. Cars, Trucks, or Motorcycles, sure. Paintball, not for me.

Are you kidding?! PB needs more scantily clad women to advertise!

[PsychoMag]

What style play is your team? Tourney/XBall? If so, very nice, it DOES need more in the empty black area. Maybe wisps of smoke or lightning?

We play D2 5/7man GPL. Some NPPL. I dont think anyone is concerned with "image" since we are a great group of guys, compared to the typical sore losers who usually curse, argue, fight, cheat, etc... the jersey is just because it can be done, never seen before, and we have sponsors who like it. If and When the time comes, obviously we will tone the graphic nature of the jersey down a bit for commercialism...