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    Jersey artist proof thread

    Got the first draft of artist proofs. This was his first shot trying to fit all of my crazy in one place so he's changing a few things. This is not a final copy he's already on proof #2

    Told him to try a different font closer to our draft, loose the animal logo on the front, move his logo somewhere else and make the writing on the back the same color.


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    Looks like he's using IMPACT for the font. You should ask pb69 what font he used.
    Thoughts in take-em or leave-em no particular order:
    -I like the side panels as they were in the other design (sans the red star).
    -To many AGD logo's
    -Would like to see the bird bigger. Wingtips at the shoulders

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    #2 in with updates.

    The AO Army logo somehow slid down. Seriously thinking about axing the Lions on the chest.


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    Looking sweet.:-)

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    He could definitely go smaller with the #'s ( I'm gunna want 3-3's ). Then he could lower the persons name a little and make the bird bigger? Is the TK quote miss quoted?

    Edit. He fixed it on the 2nd one

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    Quote Originally Posted by Flatliner333 View Post
    He could definitely go smaller with the #'s ( I'm gunna want 3-3's ). Then he could lower the persons name a little and make the bird bigger? Is the TK quote miss quoted?

    Edit. He fixed it on the 2nd one
    I'm going to be going thought that with him.

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    The splash looks really good

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    Quote Originally Posted by pgop2.0 View Post
    Looks like he's using IMPACT for the font. You should ask pb69 what font he used.
    The font used was Ore Crusher.

    I think the Name/Numbers font was WAY better on the first one. The second one looks horrible.

    Looks like the AO Army on the front could be a little bigger, but maybe that's just me. I hope that isn't his final design for that, though. The "AO Army" is the centerpiece of our jersey, and it needs to pop more

    One of the "Automags.org" logos on the sleeves is backwards.

    And as another member said a couple of days ago, if we're paying for the jerseys and the "artist", why are we also putting their logos on there?

    The side panels look O.K., it's kinda hard to picture what they'll look like on there, though.

    I kinda pictured him taking our design, and using his jersey designing experience to make it stronger.. Not trying to be a downer, but I think it needs some work.
    Last edited by Billz804; 10-04-2013 at 11:43 PM.

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    Quote Originally Posted by pgop2.0 View Post
    -Would like to see the bird bigger. Wingtips at the shoulders
    I like this idea, you could have a larger bird in the background behind the name/numbers. The "we are everywhere" and "magpies" would need to be either be axed or creatively moved though, which would stink if they need to be axed because I like them.

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    First one is definitely better of the two.

    I like pb69's version of the side pieces more.

    Splash is little "meh" on my taste but I guess that can be toned down with changing the colors.

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    For those of us purchasing a short sleeve version, how will the sleeve logos change? will it just have the lions?

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    Just tell the poor guy. When you shoot best marker out there you want the best jersey you can get. I'm sure he will understand... maybe.

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