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SlipknotX556
03-24-2005, 02:34 PM
I usually come to AO to ask this sort of thing because AO is a bit more civilized then PBN. I want your honest opinion, comments. Suggestions are always welcome. I want to try and get a new shirt out before Orlando Open, so I dont have alot of time, with production and everything. My last batch of shirts didnt do very well, they only started to sell after I dropped the price so far down, I only made 1 dollar on each shirt. I am hoping these will be different, but last time I didnt ask people what they wanted or thought of the shirt, I did what I wanted, well that dosent cut it when you are trying to appeal to the public.

Thanks

First Design....

Front:
http://img220.exs.cx/img220/7792/image118kx.th.jpg (http://img220.exs.cx/my.php?loc=img220&image=image118kx.jpg)

Back:
http://img119.exs.cx/img119/5990/fa-NewWKShirtBack.jpg

Second Design:

Front: The front of this design, although not very visible, is a stroke outlined wording, well heres a better look...
http://img234.exs.cx/img234/6231/redfont2wp.th.jpg (http://img234.exs.cx/my.php?loc=img234&image=redfont2wp.jpg)

Front:
http://img232.exs.cx/img232/3894/shirtfront12hb.th.jpg (http://img232.exs.cx/my.php?loc=img232&image=shirtfront12hb.jpg)

Back:
http://img122.exs.cx/img122/2254/shirtback26du.th.jpg (http://img122.exs.cx/my.php?loc=img122&image=shirtback26du.jpg)

Dryden
03-24-2005, 03:08 PM
Nice. I like both, but am probably more partial to the first design. My complaint about the second is the lady silhouette ... that image is way overdone anymore, so even though everything in the logo passes the 'look' test, it's just not orginal enough.

chairman_mao
03-24-2005, 03:25 PM
I dig the penguin one but I think I'd like it better if you took "warped customs" off of the front

SlipknotX556
03-24-2005, 03:33 PM
I was planning on taking Warped Kustoms off the front, I am doing another design right now, which will have some new features I just thought of while looking at my Dye, JT, Infamous, Empire clothes.

JaredMeier
03-24-2005, 03:35 PM
I think if you decide to keep the "warped customs" on the front of the penquin, you ought to make it a tad smaller. and then also bring the penguin (cool graphic btw) up higher on the chest.

JaredMeier
03-24-2005, 03:36 PM
those are very professional looking designs, by the way. good job.

SlipknotX556
03-24-2005, 03:57 PM
those are very professional looking designs, by the way. good job.


Thank you, I work very hard and long to make sure all my stuff is top quality.

p8ntball365
03-24-2005, 03:59 PM
I like the first design.

P.S. Are you ever going to make wristbands with the warped kustoms logo?

CKY_Alliance
03-24-2005, 03:59 PM
Go with the penguin! You cant go wrong with penguins! But liek soemoenm else said move it up some.

Chipper
03-24-2005, 04:02 PM
Sweet, I'd pick one up.

The penguin is an excellent idea, but I agree with JaredMeir, it could be moved up a bit.

SlipknotX556
03-24-2005, 04:06 PM
You mean something like this?

CKY_Alliance
03-24-2005, 05:32 PM
That looks better.Maybe up a couple more inches inch or two. But it looks better then the 1st one.

magman007
03-24-2005, 05:41 PM
second design wil sell much much better... trust me

FreakBaller12
03-24-2005, 06:25 PM
yea second design is very cool. Is there any plans for a silouette of a paintball player on one? I like to sport my paintball shirts with actually paintball things on it rather than companies.That's just me though.

personman
03-24-2005, 08:14 PM
the back of the first one is a little wtfbbq but they both look good

JimmyBeam
03-24-2005, 08:26 PM
on the first one i would reverse the graphics. i would put the big one on the back and the small kustom one on the front

TeamNausea
03-24-2005, 09:23 PM
I like it man I'll wear one

FooTemps
03-24-2005, 09:25 PM
i like the first design, i'd buy it (once i pay quik for his shirt, lol)

SpecialBlend2786
03-24-2005, 09:27 PM
I like both.

The second one is awesome, the WK logo looks SHWEET. But yeah, i agree the lady thing is everywhere, it'd look better with it off.

SlipknotX556
03-24-2005, 11:12 PM
Alright, well heres the newest one. I put the blue outline of the wording in, to make it more eye catching, I personally think a little color was nice. I put the angled Warped Kustoms on the back of the shirt, because many of people have said it was the first they have seen like it, really find it a unique look. I am trying to have a blue outline of my logo done, so I can overlap the two, make it look alittle 3D.

JaredMeier
03-25-2005, 12:56 AM
I know that the fonts are different.. but as an idea..
http://img235.exs.cx/img235/6475/frontnewcopy9xm.jpg

if you went this route.. i think placing the name below flows better given the upward movement of the penquin .. popping out

- AND sorry that I got the name wrong! it should have said Kustoms.

CKY_Alliance
03-25-2005, 01:10 AM
I like the one above the letters just flow better curved. For the back you coudl just put the name across regualr or soemthing

TeamNausea
03-25-2005, 02:31 AM
LOVE the one with red outline....make one and gimme a price!

Barfly
03-25-2005, 02:35 AM
i like the letters bellow the penguin and then on the back angled writing you had at first.

Enemy
03-25-2005, 03:34 AM
i like the second one maybe a hybrid with WK on the front and the wk with the girl on the back with the warped customs spelled out on the side/to back angled..idk id like it like that

la690
03-25-2005, 12:03 PM
hey! my name is HK! you stole that shirt design from me! haha jp man those are sweet designs.

wimag
03-25-2005, 01:13 PM
the second design looks good. lose the lady and center the logo. i'd buy it

slade
03-25-2005, 07:47 PM
i definately like the revise of the first design, but i think itd be best if you moved the "warped kustoms" so that its under the penguin... its bothering me how its off to the side. i like it how its slanted though, and the color is def a nice touch. id buy one. the second design isnt exactly my style, and the lady silouette is DEFINATELY overdone. itl probably sell well though. and as someone suggested, itd be nice if you made a paintball image, after all it is a paintball t-shirt.

SlipknotX556
03-25-2005, 08:02 PM
Right now we are currently trying to find a picture of a baller to put onto the shirt. Once we get the right image, color it up, make it look all good, I will post what it looks like. We may be using one of the many pictures of my favorite kid Dave Mullis(ffry from PBN), he has an insane amount of pictures taken of him when goes to ball, has supported WK since we began. Should have a design up later tonight or tommorow.

Enemy
03-26-2005, 03:28 AM
i like the lady on there but its your company.. will still look good without her though

frontrunner
03-26-2005, 08:58 AM
i'd rock either one for you but i like the 2nd

Southparkrocks
03-26-2005, 09:38 AM
I wish the back of the 2nd one was on the front.

Enemy
03-29-2005, 05:24 AM
if you can make me a shirt they way i described it i will buy it even if its a one of one!!