Need your opinion Art class

[bunker17]

guys im doing a paintball poster for my photoshop class any comments would be welcome here is the pic shoot away
<img src="http://www.geocities.com/zeus2003/Photoshop.jpg">

[zaqwert6]

Only that the paintball player in the background could look a litle more...paintball player. In fact I would think perhaps a Tourny in the background , may be a sky shot of a field , would be more appropriate to the product.

Looks good so far tho.

[phantomhitman]

leave the ps filters alone. the best ads and posters and simple and clean. unplacticwrap the paintball player, get a good shot of him, clean up everything and your done.

[doc_Zox]

Why have you curved the type?

What is up with the Fonts E middle stroke?

What is going on with the letter spacing with the M,
and the E OR set?

Why is the type on the box spine curved?
Why is this a duotone with black and a sedate blue?

Why is "Management System..." a 3 line with a widowed "Team"?
Why is it not centered on the box?

Why does the Lighting effect spotlight fall off on the type making it blurry and dim?

[bunker17]

il take the feedback into account probably do the next iteration of it by thursday