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[rkjunior303]

i'd like some constructive criticism..

http://rkjunior.fallingaway.com/gallery/pictures/MassD-test.gif

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Aside from putting buildings and the team name mass destruction, it may come off a little sensative to people. But other than that it looks good, did you make it?

[WingMan13]

I would like to see a little more destruction on those buildings, its kinda hard to see. I like it!

[turbo chicken]

where's the destruction ... i say put an a-bomb cloud in there!!! :headbang:

[tech-chan]

Heck ya.

[Patron God of Pirates]

Too complex. As a rule of thumb with logos, simpler is better. When doing a logo try to think of all the possible applications. How will it look on a jersey? How will it look in print? How will it look on the side of a bus? (if you get your own bus... you know... or plane... you never know ;) )

Also consider how big your original image is compared to how large it will need to be printed. If the size you posted here is the full image size, it will look like a mess of pixels when blown up on the back of a jersey. If you have the applications to do so, consider creating something vector rather than raster based. Vector artwork is much more flexible in terms of being resized or modified for various media.

I do like the idea. My advice would be to think about how to covey the concept so that it can be read and understood by a bystander while you streak by on your way to the 50.

-Patron

[Zneaky]

First impression,

I saw Mass Destruction, I saw buildings, I thought 9-11. I looked through the buildings to see if the was a correlation; I found none.

I think it is risky, especially considering what the guy before me said. What if you make it small for application. Then, people see "Twin Towers" that aren't really there.

Just my impression.

Z

[paintballfiend]

Yeah, you can't really see the destruction.

[neppo1345]

May I suggest turning the skyline into a silhouette

Here, I threw this together real quick:

http://i30.photobucket.com/albums/c348/neppo1345/MASSSDESTRUCT.jpg

Skyline silhoutte would need cleaned up, as well as the atomic explosion, but I didn't feel like taking the time to do it.

[rkjunior303]

neppo - go make me one in vector! lol

[Chaos_Theory!]

People need to get over the very VERY slight tie it looks to have to 911. Just because there are crumbling buildings and the teams name is mass destruction shouldnt be looked down upon. Its not like they are terrorists, so people need to grow up.

Anyway, it is to complex and its hard to see the damaged buildings.

[don miguel]

i'd like some constructive criticism..

http://rkjunior.fallingaway.com/gallery/pictures/MassD-test.gif
very nice, looks really 80's like this:
http://www.metalunderground.com/images/bandlogos/King_Diamond_logo.jpg
not that I like king diamond alot, thier okay though. The singer sounds like he was kicked in the bawlz really hard.
BTW is your team playing NEPL this year? we are going to. If you are, what division?

[mag_lover05]

don...just stop posting.


now, i would suggest putting a mushroom cloud in the middle of those buildings so it looks like an a-bomb went off....that is the king of mass destruction

[don miguel]

don...just stop posting.

the only way is to ban me, but I didn't do anything wrong. I just complimented his idea.

[rkjunior303]

new update.

http://rkjunior.fallingaway.com/gallery/pictures/MAssD2.gif

[Automagsam]

new update.

http://rkjunior.fallingaway.com/gallery/pictures/MAssD2.gif
I like it, and I do agree that it is a little sensative, and to an extent people need to get over the 911 connection, but then again I'd like to point out is there really a need for showing the destruction of a city preriod here?

[neppo1345]

new update.

http://rkjunior.fallingaway.com/gallery/pictures/MAssD2.gif

I like it.

[jenarelJAM]

I like it.

For the first logo, I didn't even notice the buildings were crumbling, it just looked like a skyline. It wasn't until someone pointed it out and I went back to check it out, that I noticed, and it still wasn't very clear.

The second logo, I really like. The mushroom cloud looks a little funky, but it's a logo. I don't think people will be critical of how the mushroom cloud is shaped. Colors, check. Easy reading, check. The "Mass" might be a little small, but that's all I see. "Cool" factor, check.

Check :hail:

[rkjunior303]

I want to play around with the "mass" a little bit.I may try to hide it on top of the city behind it (but over the column of the mushroom cloud)

[rkjunior303]

I think we have a winner.

http://rkjunior.fallingaway.com/gallery/pictures/mass3.gif

[ProblemKinder]

print that out on a jersey and let us see how it looks. otherwise i like them. very nice.

honestly i never made any 911 connection until someone else mentioned it. then i continued to not make a 911 connection. the team name isn't "mass planes flying into buildings destruction" it's just a skyline. oh well.

[hobbesTZ]

The original text had a heavy metal look to it. Just put a lightning bolt or a hammer behind it and call it a day :p

[iambored]

there is still not enough destruction. Most people think of mass destruction and get thoughts of destroyed buildings and stuff not a mushroom cloud in an untouched city

[ProblemKinder]

there is still not enough destruction. Most people think of mass destruction and get thoughts of destroyed buildings and stuff not a mushroom cloud in an untouched city

hrmm i agree :bounce: