Which Jersey?

[rikkter]

making custom jerseys for a team me and some people are gonna make. PLEASE. i WANT FEED BACK. what to change, what to add, what to remove. etc.

design 1:
http://www.rikkter.com/junk/des1.jpg
design 2:
http://www.rikkter.com/junk/des2.jpg
design 3:
http://www.rikkter.com/junk/des3.jpg

[Riot[Z-Grip]]

I chose Design 1, but I think that it needs a few adjustments:

1)The black in the name needs to be darker to constrast more.
2)I don't really like the 'haze' behind the team name, it still needs to be there, but maybe less of it.
3)What's your team name, I may be slow but I can't really make it out ;).

-Riot

[rikkter]

thanks, lol. its iconoclast. not really a speedball team.. a scenario team, but, who knows, i might be able to convince a teammate to go speedball

[TransMan]

i like 2 u can read it easier

[logamus]

i like the look of the first one, but the font is so jacked you cant really read it on any of them. if the idea is to have people come up and ask you what it says on your jersey then go with it, otherwise i would get the font adjusted abit so the letters are a tad easier to read.

[rikkter]

well if anyone wants to help me out with it, i made a blank jersey.
http://www.rikkter.com/junk/blankjersey.psd
might have to right click

thanks for the comments and suggestions guys:)

[OttO]

i would say jusy make it easier to read. at first i thought it said holocaust.:confused:

[rikkter]

hows this
http://www.rikkter.com/junk/jersey.jpg

text is on the little short side tho

[OttO]

ya. thats good.

[Bront]

That last one is much better.

Maybe you should look into getting a completely custom jersey. Those Dye ones look like there is some netting in the shoulders that would get in the way of your team name.

[rikkter]

i've emailed JT and DYE about a total custom jersey, but i like the DYE ones with their padding