Jersey artist proof thread

[PBLife]

Is it me or shouldn't the AGD logo be more prominent? BT will I have the option to make the AO logo bigger on the sleeves or will I be stuck with the final draft? I like tots logo and the original. Kinda want to have old/new together.

[Billz804]

I don't mind their logos being on there a whole lot either, but I don't want to see that he's given attention to adding his own logo when the whole design looks like something that was made in high school graphic arts.

[Patron God of Pirates]

I don't mind their logos being on there a whole lot either, but I don't want to see that he's given attention to adding his own logo when the whole design looks like something that was made in high school graphic arts.

lol I wouldn't go that far. I'm assuming there are some design restrictions the we are (or at least I am) unaware of. I used to run into that allot when designing for flexo print. I'm staring at it trying to figure out what flattened it so much compared to your design. Two things I noticed; the hex pattern is now horizontal rather than vertical, the paint splashes no longer migrate out onto the hex.

[BTAutoMag]

Well what if we take to solid line out of the border and make the hex borders as the borders

[Patron God of Pirates]

Well what if we take to solid line out of the border and make the hex borders as the borders

Looks this design incorporates the eclipse splash only, not sure if that was deliberate or not. But removing the border doesn't really do anything without the "splat" splash. I should probably just quit yammering my chop. As a graphic artist there are no more difficult clients than other graphic artists. My instinct on this one is to have Travis send the template and design restrictions to Blitz804 (if he's willing) since his design was the one everyone voted for. Then he can plug the deign in and if any changes need to be made after that at least everyone is working from the same source files.

I could do it as well if both parties want to send the files to me, but I can't promise a quick turn time.

[Billz804]

lol I wouldn't go that far. I'm assuming there are some design restrictions the we are (or at least I am) unaware of. I used to run into that allot when designing for flexo print. I'm staring at it trying to figure out what flattened it so much compared to your design. Two things I noticed; the hex pattern is now horizontal rather than vertical, the paint splashes no longer migrate out onto the hex.

That's a good point. I shouldn't be so harsh because I really don't know about the constraints.

I just want it to be awesome!

Looks this design incorporates the eclipse splash only, not sure if that was deliberate or not. But removing the border doesn't really do anything without the "splat" splash. I should probably just quit yammering my chop. As a graphic artist there are no more difficult clients than other graphic artists. My instinct on this one is to have Travis send the template and design restrictions to Blitz804 (if he's willing) since his design was the one everyone voted for. Then he can plug the deign in and if any changes need to be made after that at least everyone is working from the same source files.

I could do it as well if both parties want to send the files to me, but I can't promise a quick turn time.

I don't know how well I'd be able to do. Plugging pics into a small-scale template for a rough draft is easy, but I'm not too experienced with vector and all of that.

I would be happy to know exactly what his restraints are, though, so that maybe we can give him a better idea of what we'd like to see done.

[BTAutoMag]

I gave him a picture of a gun and said "here"

anyways, here is 3rd proof and I really like it

[BTAutoMag]

and this is from me quick in photoshop
proof blue.jpg
proof camo.jpg
proof gold.jpg
proof joker.jpg
proof pink.jpg

[Dayspring]

Approved.

[BTAutoMag]

Approved.

are you serious? youve been against this the whole time.

I feel very accomplished right now

[Billz804]

Gradient needs more white and less black IMO. He needs to actually rework the spacing of the text on the side panels, because all he did was remove the stars.

..And take his logo off of the front

I hate to sound so picky, but this guy is getting PAID to do this.

[BTAutoMag]

I could go both ways on it

[Patron God of Pirates]

At the risk of sounding repetitive, I would suggest grey on grey for the side panels, like Billz original.
I can live with this iteration though.

[BTAutoMag]

ok I actually like that too

[Flatliner333]

I love it ...call me happy,his logo is already on the back, replace his logo on the front bottom center with the older AGD crest and I would poop kittens with chainsaws (that means good). BT I am even good with the the bird on the back, you can see it clearly and it's not covered up with the slogan.

Edit: as long as he can fit 333 as my# with smaller fonts .