Tell me what yall think

[hostage]

http://www.rit.edu/~dji1133/crossfire/index.html

Well I am almost done with this website, I am going to fine tweak it and add more to the player sections and redo some of the content and alignment, if any of yall have nay ideas that I should add please say so, I am all for constructive critism.
-Hostage

[hitech]

Here is some quick proof reading. Suggested changes are in italics.

Welcome to Crossfire Sports, our field and our pro-shop are located in the back of Red Barn Square off Broadway. For your convenience we have an air-conditioned store to help you with what ever your paintball needs are. Our contact information as well as our hours of operation are listed below. Thank you for dropping by!
-Webmaster

[dre1919]

That's not a bad site really. It's pretty clean, and easy to navigate through so you can find the info you're looking for. I like the feathered photo look too. I think I would like to see some more shots of the field (it looks like a sweet one) and maybe some shots of the display cases / upclose items in the pro shop. That one photo of the guy on the phone rates pretty high on the unintentional comedy scale if you think about it the right way.

Couldn't you just see him saying "What?! He said what about my 'mag? You tell him I'm coming over there to kick his (word not allowed here)." Heh, heh, heh... Maybe that's just me..

Anyway, good job though!

[hostage]

lol thanx for the proof reading, I overlooked that. I am dyslexic, so it kind of impares me, as well as i do all of my html editing under notepad, which does not have a spellcheck, ill fix them right away.
-Hostage

Thanx again, i fixed the spelling errors.

BTW did anyone notice the animation rollover?

Also in the players section we will add thumnails for people to be able to print out pictures. The site is new and I will get the players pics over time.

[Krazy Ivan]

The site doesn't seem to hold any real information. You need some kind of reason for people to go, and get something out of it. The store page definelty needs some work, as in maybe some prices of popular guns, more pictures of your guns..and the such.

[ur4me2bunker]

Not bad. At least you got the idea of white back ground with black text down. Easy reading is the best way to go. There also isn't too much flash. Over all this is a great start.
You should really add some more info though. Such as feild fees, what types of fills you do, things like that. I would also suggest you add a FAQ to it.
Overall, great start.

[hostage]

Thank you guys so much yall are really helping. I am web designer, this makes it easier when you get feedback from the users.
Thanx,
Hostage

[ur4me2bunker]

I'm a desinger myself and good friend heads the web design department of a magor add agency. If you ever need some feedback just let me know. I can also help you with some pointers to get your site noticed in search engines.

[paintbattler]

i think its nice..

[Thrash]

It's a decent site but just put more things on it. When it said store, i clicked on it and no gun prices or anything. My wanna put what you have for sale for more business. Not a bad site. I like the faq idea. Maybe some more pictures for all the fields instead of just one. Include the field fees also.