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[personman]

Originally posted by AGD
smaller x logo with slogan

I like this without the AO logo.. takes away from the Mag's glory as said before.

[TNS2k2]

i think all the X's will really keep people remembering, Xmag: X marks the spot

[Prezents]

[Prezents]

Chat

Sorry T,

[FutureMagOwner]

if someone(such as tom can host the full quality non cropped version for me ill send ill post it up here)

[Jack & Coke]

Re: Advertisement ERRORS!

Originally posted by ben_JD
I hope that this post makes it to your attention prior to placing the ad.

1) Breech is misspelled

"Breach" is incorrect.

"Breech is correct.

2) Override is misspelled

"Overide" is incorrect.

"Override" [two "Rs"] is correct.


Suggestions, not errors follow:

3) Spell out "Level". Lvl seems rushed.

4) Why is Aluminum capitalized in the "All Aluminum..." bullet point? I think for consistency, you should decapitalize Aluminum.

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Like this?:

- Level 10 anti-chop system
- ACE (Anti-Chop Eye)
- 1 ounce Superbolt
- Removable breech
- Manual override
- Aluminum body
- 2600 pass CnC milling
- All-aluminum RT valve
- Autococker barrel threads
- Adjustable magnetic trigger
- 20 bps semi mode
- Unbreakable on/off switch
- Ultra Light E______ grip frame [what does "E" stand for?]
- 2.7 pounds without barrel

ben_JD is correct!

[Dslexik]

You should have slogans something like:

You know you wanna smack your balls through this.

Let your balls take the smoothest flight ever.

Let your balls fly in the lap of luxury.

Yes it all has to do with balls. I know. (not one)

18 times faster than smackin balls yourself.

Put on earth for a very good reason.

No more slamin balls in your own home.

Fastest way to work balls in your opponets face. (not this one, I know)

Some of those are pretty bad, but work with it.

[Mossman]

Originally posted by Dslexik
You should have slogans something like:

You know you wanna smack your balls through this.

Let your balls take the smoothest flight ever.

Let your balls fly in the lap of luxury.

Yes it all has to do with balls. I know. (not one)

18 times faster than smackin balls yourself.

Put on earth for a very good reason.

No more slamin balls in your own home.

Fastest way to work balls in your opponets face. (not this one, I know)

Some of those are pretty bad, but work with it .

No.

[xmagaman]

BINGO-Tom, the last add, its awesome. I agree with the chat

[Stupi]

A little late, but here's what I did today

Here. I have a full size, if anyone is interested

[spawnboy]

wow...

Well done Stupi!
I didn't have much time...
here's my feeble attempt at a few words anyway.


spawner

[omni]

I started work'n on this, never had time to finnish.

I still don't have the PSD file downloaded hehe.

[Reo5th]

PLEASE don't let the ad go in with that orange/brown background. I'm liking what i see with the grey and blues. The orange blue contrast is not appealing. Also, I agree with Shartley that there are way too many X's. They get the point. And That barrel! HORRIBLE! fix the coloration or just use the silver color that was there before.

[manike]

It's getting far too busy for me now. I'm too busy looking at all the extra images and slogans and not appreciating the marker...

And that is ONE VERY SEXY LOOKING MARKER! It stands out on it's own, more images and stuff just hide it.

I'd be tempted to do Muzikmans all black with his slogan AND just the image of the gun... Anyone want to see if that works for me?

Please do not put the AO logo begind it, I think it really breaks up and detracts from the sleek looking lines of the marker.

And most people won't understand or appreciate why it's there anyway.

KISS!

manike

[ben_JD]

When will this advertisement surface?