I agree...no orange and brown. Bleh!...it looks kinda gross behind the nice blue finish. Maybe you should try using a light blue (sky blue) fade to a darker blue? I agree with the idea of not overdoing the "X" motif...let the marker sell itself. If you are going to use the "X marks the spot" idea, please put the "X" next to the rest of the tagline...it won't make as much sense across the page. Here are some taglines I like better than "X marks the spot" anyway:
"Guess who's back?" - Yeah, we know we never left but think of the ad from a Cocker or Angel owner's view.
"Taking over a field near you" - Might as well tell 'em what's in store for the competition.
"Not your Mom's Mag" - That one makes me chuckle.
"You've got the tattoos and piercings...now get something really X-treme." - Plays to the extreme sport junkie in all of us.
"Our design team got a bit wild..." - self explanatory.
"The X-Mag...for all the times you're not a little Angel" - I dig this one. A little friendly jab.
"Welcome back" - says a lot with a little.
Hope this helps.
"Guess who's back?" - Yeah, we know we never left but think of the ad from a Cocker or Angel owner's view.
"Taking over a field near you" - Might as well tell 'em what's in store for the competition.
"Not your Mom's Mag" - That one makes me chuckle.
"You've got the tattoos and piercings...now get something really X-treme." - Plays to the extreme sport junkie in all of us.
"Our design team got a bit wild..." - self explanatory.
"The X-Mag...for all the times you're not a little Angel" - I dig this one. A little friendly jab.
"Welcome back" - says a lot with a little.
Hope this helps.
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