My Paintball Paper for School

[MDethCKR]

[gamarada717]

I wrote a peom on paintball once. She had no idea what I was talking about but since she knew I always lived up to my work I got an A on it. Writing is a fun and enjoyable thing for me, I just hate writing page after page. I'd rather type it.

[-Carnifex-]

Originally posted by MattG
Im in highschool and on a scale from 1-10 on the serious scale i would say about a 6.8 But who cares its school.

Good, keep that mentality.

[dinger]

until you do read the entire thing, one would get the effect that you get relaxed when yellow-colored pillows shoot you with gelatin balls that express your aggression.


hehehe nice! dont forget to let us know how you did on it

[Nick O time]

ok

first off lots isnt a word, neither is a lot
use most or much or many depending on the sentance but i would use most in this sentance

When I walk to my car and look at the aurora of colors found all over the my body it creates a visual symphony of unequaled magnitude that makes me know I great time no matter what happened.

When I walk to my car and look at the aurora of colors found all over the my body it creates a visual symphony of unequaled magnitude that lets me understand that I had great time no matter what happened.
Just sounds better but i dunno

[elpimpo]

wow i know what my next english paper on paintball is going to look like

[Nick O time]

writing stuff on paintball is actually really easy

i had to write a speach last year on a thing and i wrote it on the paintball gun. the speech took the whole 45 minute class period. i was only expecting it to last like 15 minutes or so cuz i never practice my speeches .

[dinger]

Re: ok

Originally posted by Nick O time
first off lots isnt a word, neither is a lot
use most or much or many depending on the sentance but i would use most in this sentance

"a lot" is a 'word' but then again i KNOW that "sentance" isn't a word

[darklord]

Re: My Paintball Paper for School

Originally posted by MattG
...When I walk to my car and look at the aurora of colors found all over the my body it creates a visual symphony of unequaled magnitude..

Uh, no offense, but this just sounds like you're trying too hard to come off as "smart", it's overly dramatic, IMO. What grade are you in? Man, that is an easy assignment... meh, at least you did your homework.

[MattG]

haha Thanks guys it is due tommorow and knowing my teacher i will have the grade next week. I will let you know. And about the magnitude plether sentance some guy on pbnation gave it to me and i thought it funny so i put it in there. And im in 10th grade!