The grade i got on my PB paper

**elpimpo** · 09-16-2003, 04:24 PM

yeah shes probly one of those teachers that never give an a i mean come on it was a creative paper about pb why doesnt that deserve an a. freakin nazi

**edweird** · 09-16-2003, 06:22 PM

Honestly I am highly suprised that she did not just write "Your going to shoot your eye out" and hand it back to you...

**f3rr3+** · 09-16-2003, 06:25 PM

i would expect you to get a a... its b/ b-... tops...

**elpimpo** · 09-16-2003, 06:30 PM

Originally posted by edweird
Honestly I am highly suprised that she did not just write "Your going to shoot your eye out" and hand it back to you...

lmao

**cris8762** · 09-16-2003, 06:44 PM

I'm sorry but that was not as long as a sophmore english paper should be

if it was supposed to be that short then ok it was decent, but if not then you need to spread out your ideas

if i was someone grading that "paper" and i had 100 papers to read, i would skim that quickly, say "too flowery and confusing" and give it a C

just my opinion

**pbzmag** · 09-16-2003, 06:48 PM

Originally posted by edweird
Honestly I am highly suprised that she did not just write "Your going to shoot your eye out" and hand it back to you...

Is you name Ralph?

**Snapps** · 09-16-2003, 06:57 PM

and if it is, why did you leave ur friend with his toungue stuck to the pole, you insidious "friend".....

**elpimpo** · 09-16-2003, 07:09 PM

i tripple dog dare you

**rehme** · 09-16-2003, 07:42 PM

Originally posted by edweird
Honestly I am highly suprised that she did not just write "Your going to shoot your eye out" and hand it back to you...

best christmas movie ever!

**GoatBoy** · 09-17-2003, 11:16 AM

Originally posted by cris8762
I'm sorry but that was not as long as a sophmore english paper should be

if it was supposed to be that short then ok it was decent, but if not then you need to spread out your ideas

if i was someone grading that "paper" and i had 100 papers to read, i would skim that quickly, say "too flowery and confusing" and give it a C

just my opinion

I'd have to agree with you here.

I wouldn't even call this a 'paper'. You'd have to quadruple-space it and include an illustration just to get it to fill a page.

**Meph** · 09-17-2003, 01:32 PM

Reminds me of Strongbad Email #64

The Yellow Darts' Englilish paper! With a little double space action. Errrr.... some tripple space action. And them some money taped on the back to seal the deal!

**dinger** · 09-17-2003, 01:47 PM

2 weeks ago we were assigned to do a "Descriptive Essay" in which you DESCRIPTIVELY describe a moment or scene. it was due yesterday, and since im a loaf i forgot about it and turned it in today

and since my bro didn't get off the comp, i fell asleep, and then did it in the 40 minutes i had before the bus came. its 1 page long, and just describes a paintball game. i WOULD post it, but my computer is CRAPPY AND OUTDATED [cough*momgetmeanewcomp*cough] and therefore i cant copy and paste it

plus its too long for me to retype

even though it is double spaced

cant wait to see the F i get

**SlartyBartFast** · 09-17-2003, 02:36 PM

Hmm, don't flame the teacher. You think they enjoy grading papers after all the kids go home or having to do grading at home?

I was an English tutor in college, and write for a living now. I don't know how the "paper" compared to others and don't know the specifics of your class or the assignment.

But....

If I was you I'd be VERY glad of the mark you got.

**-=Squid=-** · 09-17-2003, 04:05 PM

Its by no means bad, but I think you are lucky to have gotten a high C. My english teacher would have given that something like a low C. The opening sentence wasnt that great, kinda poorly worded in parts. But hey, its PB! Who cares! I love somehow writing my essays and transforming them into the topic of PB!

The grade i got on my PB paper