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  • Zedaine
    The Green Mag Owner
    • Jan 2004
    • 49

    #1

    English Class Paintball Commercial

    I have been assigned to make a commercial for my persuasive essay in english, about paintball. So here it is

    Enjoy.


    (To avoid some confusion people are having, I am the one getting shot, not a friend.)



    WMV Version - http://www.jayloo.com/files/vids/300...movie_672a.wmv

    You will need quicktime to view this video.

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    Last edited by Zedaine; 12-13-2004, 03:32 PM.


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  • SAW
    It's a trap!
    • Nov 2004
    • 846

    #2
    goggles anyone?
    Other than that, its a good movie.
    Back at this...

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    • Gr0dy
      • Oct 2004
      • 431

      #3
      nice movie, if i played that at my school. id get suspended :)

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      • Couponqueen89
        AKA Couponqueen89
        • Jun 2003
        • 1571

        #4
        doesnt work for me..
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        • Tunaman
          Specialized AGD Tech

          • Dec 2000
          • 8643

          #5
          With no goggles on that movie is a severe detriment to the sport. Get the goggles on and try it again. You should know better.
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          • urbansix
            my God, it's full of stars
            • Aug 2004
            • 95

            #6
            I'd be curius as to what the wording/purpose/goal of the assignment is. Are you supposed to make a commercial to "persuade" a point or product? I am assuming since it's for your persuasive essay. If that is the case, what are you selling with this one - the joys of overshooting & bonus balling? Derder.com's in-your-face fast-editet loud-musiced ode to the joys overshooting & bonus balling? And what does teach say about 2/3 of the vide being a "quotation" (not plagarized since it has credits)?

            Not trying to be mean with this post - just trying to get the message. But cool - we never got to do videos as class assignments.
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            • billabongboy13j
              Operation Ivy
              • Jan 2004
              • 1468

              #7
              if i were wanting to try paintballing and saw that vid i definatly wouldnt go.
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              • Major Ho
                Long time no see
                • Jun 2001
                • 1262

                #8
                Originally posted by urbansix
                I'd be curius as to what the wording/purpose/goal of the assignment is. Are you supposed to make a commercial to "persuade" a point or product? I am assuming since it's for your persuasive essay. If that is the case, what are you selling with this one - the joys of overshooting & bonus balling? Derder.com's in-your-face fast-editet loud-musiced ode to the joys overshooting & bonus balling? And what does teach say about 2/3 of the vide being a "quotation" (not plagarized since it has credits)?

                Not trying to be mean with this post - just trying to get the message. But cool - we never got to do videos as class assignments.
                Ditto, I fail to see the purpose/meaning/message of this video? Hope your teacher is lenient on grading.

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                • Zedaine
                  The Green Mag Owner
                  • Jan 2004
                  • 49

                  #9
                  Originally posted by Major Ho
                  Ditto, I fail to see the purpose/meaning/message of this video? Hope your teacher is lenient on grading.
                  I'll be sure to tell you all what grade I get and the reaction of the class :)

                  This statement "I fail to see the purpose/meaning/message of this video?" shouldn't end with a question mark, someone needs to go back to english.


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                  • Alpha
                    Support our troops. <3
                    • Nov 2004
                    • 841

                    #10
                    Ouch. I think the shooter was far enough back that there is no chance for eye injury. At least Zeddy had his gogs on.

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                    • MayAMonkeyBeYourPinata
                      Another One Bites The Dust
                      • Feb 2003
                      • 2246

                      #11
                      So you shot somebody, and then stole a movie from derder.

                      Great Job!
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                      • p8ntball365
                        Registered User
                        • Aug 2003
                        • 1395

                        #12
                        so you shot your friend in the back, then he was showing off his welts, to prove what point?

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                        • tony3
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                          • Feb 2003
                          • 3740

                          #13
                          Thanks a lot, now I don't want to go paintballing.

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                          • p8ntball72
                            www.southwestvoodoo.com
                            • Nov 2002
                            • 467

                            #14
                            [QUOTE=Zedaine]I have been assigned to make a commercial for my persuasive essay in english, about paintball. QUOTE]


                            I think you missed the point of your assignment.
                            commercial : an advertisement broadcast on radio or television.

                            persuasive : to move by argument, entreaty, or expostulation to a belief, position, or course of action


                            If your school offers a Video production class I suggest you take it {never shoot video into the sun}

                            I'd give you a.... F
                            Last edited by p8ntball72; 12-12-2004, 08:24 PM.
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                            • Conversekidz
                              Just a guy with a gun
                              • Dec 2004
                              • 634

                              #15
                              I'm going to sound like a $%^& right now

                              But WTF was that? You just showed us a video of you pelting the crap out of your friend, causing him massive welts on the back. You show that you can shoot a defencless post, and you stole video of pro's playing shooting each other POINT BLANK. Seriously, wtf.

                              Your video had no point.


                              If anything videos like this are going to turn people away from the sport, not make it look like something enjoyable.


                              If I was your teacher, you would get a D at best.

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