English Class Paintball Commercial

[Zedaine]

I have been assigned to make a commercial for my persuasive essay in english, about paintball. So here it is

Enjoy.


(To avoid some confusion people are having, I am the one getting shot, not a friend.)

http://x-treme.us/Masamune/zedspaintballmovie.mov

WMV Version - http://www.jayloo.com/files/vids/300...movie_672a.wmv

You will need quicktime to view this video.

ULT, fastest rate of fire in video 14 BPS, Average 12.25, little slow... haven't played in months getting a bit rusty.

[SAW]

goggles anyone?
Other than that, its a good movie.

[Gr0dy]

nice movie, if i played that at my school. id get suspended :)

[Flow_Tech]

doesnt work for me..

[Tunaman]

With no goggles on that movie is a severe detriment to the sport. Get the goggles on and try it again. You should know better.

[urbansix]

I'd be curius as to what the wording/purpose/goal of the assignment is. Are you supposed to make a commercial to "persuade" a point or product? I am assuming since it's for your persuasive essay. If that is the case, what are you selling with this one - the joys of overshooting & bonus balling? Derder.com's in-your-face fast-editet loud-musiced ode to the joys overshooting & bonus balling? And what does teach say about 2/3 of the vide being a "quotation" (not plagarized since it has credits)?

Not trying to be mean with this post - just trying to get the message. But cool - we never got to do videos as class assignments.

[B.A.M.]

if i were wanting to try paintballing and saw that vid i definatly wouldnt go.

[Major Ho]

I'd be curius as to what the wording/purpose/goal of the assignment is. Are you supposed to make a commercial to "persuade" a point or product? I am assuming since it's for your persuasive essay. If that is the case, what are you selling with this one - the joys of overshooting & bonus balling? Derder.com's in-your-face fast-editet loud-musiced ode to the joys overshooting & bonus balling? And what does teach say about 2/3 of the vide being a "quotation" (not plagarized since it has credits)?

Not trying to be mean with this post - just trying to get the message. But cool - we never got to do videos as class assignments.

Ditto, I fail to see the purpose/meaning/message of this video? Hope your teacher is lenient on grading.

[Zedaine]

Ditto, I fail to see the purpose/meaning/message of this video? Hope your teacher is lenient on grading.

I'll be sure to tell you all what grade I get and the reaction of the class :)

This statement "I fail to see the purpose/meaning/message of this video?" shouldn't end with a question mark, someone needs to go back to english.

[Alpha]

Ouch. I think the shooter was far enough back that there is no chance for eye injury. At least Zeddy had his gogs on.

[MayAMonkeyBeYourPinata]

So you shot somebody, and then stole a movie from derder.

Great Job!

[p8ntball365]

so you shot your friend in the back, then he was showing off his welts, to prove what point?

[tony3]

Thanks a lot, now I don't want to go paintballing.

[p8ntball72]

[QUOTE=Zedaine]I have been assigned to make a commercial for my persuasive essay in english, about paintball. QUOTE]


I think you missed the point of your assignment.
commercial : an advertisement broadcast on radio or television.

persuasive : to move by argument, entreaty, or expostulation to a belief, position, or course of action


If your school offers a Video production class I suggest you take it {never shoot video into the sun}

I'd give you a.... F

[Conversekidz]

I'm going to sound like a $%^& right now

But WTF was that? You just showed us a video of you pelting the crap out of your friend, causing him massive welts on the back. You show that you can shoot a defencless post, and you stole video of pro's playing shooting each other POINT BLANK. Seriously, wtf.

Your video had no point.


If anything videos like this are going to turn people away from the sport, not make it look like something enjoyable.


If I was your teacher, you would get a D at best.