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  • bunker17
    Registered User
    • Apr 2004
    • 440

    #1

    Need your opinion Art class

    guys im doing a paintball poster for my photoshop class any comments would be welcome here is the pic shoot away
    My feedback
  • zaqwert6
    Nobody Special
    • Aug 2003
    • 108

    #2
    Only that the paintball player in the background could look a litle more...paintball player. In fact I would think perhaps a Tourny in the background , may be a sky shot of a field , would be more appropriate to the product.

    Looks good so far tho.

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    • phantomhitman
      ao's official bad guy
      • Oct 2003
      • 1841

      #3
      leave the ps filters alone. the best ads and posters and simple and clean. unplacticwrap the paintball player, get a good shot of him, clean up everything and your done.
      my feedback
      countdown on devilmag day........ill let you now

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      • doc_Zox
        Team Dead by Dawn
        • Jun 2003
        • 723

        #4
        Why have you curved the type?

        What is up with the Fonts E middle stroke?

        What is going on with the letter spacing with the M,
        and the E OR set?

        Why is the type on the box spine curved?
        Why is this a duotone with black and a sedate blue?

        Why is "Management System..." a 3 line with a widowed "Team"?
        Why is it not centered on the box?

        Why does the Lighting effect spotlight fall off on the type making it blurry and dim?

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        • bunker17
          Registered User
          • Apr 2004
          • 440

          #5
          il take the feedback into account probably do the next iteration of it by thursday
          My feedback

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