a paintball conversation prose

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  • FreakBaller12
    e-tough

    • May 2003
    • 3663

    #1

    a paintball conversation prose

    i wrote this in the matter of 10 minutes, it came to me in a dream(not really)

    new thread same ole pome, betetr title(tahnx carnifex)

    everything passes through your mind,
    your doubts
    your fears,
    your hands are clammy,
    you got the chills and shakes all over you body,
    your gameplan is reminded
    it is a echo in your ear
    you hear over and over again, you hear the 10 seconds warning, butterflys appear in your stomach, you get a quick cold, sweat on you, you look for your bunker to go to, grip up and dig down
    it all comes down to this...
    GO! GO! GO!
    all your doubts disappear it all comes together
    all your team mates run to your pre-assigned bunkers.
    all of your tea mates run like clock work, it's automatic
    you run for your bunker
    you dive by behind the cover you hear the roar of the crowd
    the noise of over 100 paintballs flyign thru the air into bunkers you turn and start snap shootign it's all automatic..it"s what i live for


    $eth
    I knew not what I did but am now edumacated
  • SpongeBobSquarePants
    I'm back!
    • Jan 2002
    • 3296

    #2
    Three, Two, One,
    10 Seconds...

    Hoppers on
    Markers ready

    Heart Thumping
    Blood Pumping

    Mind raceing
    Fingers pacing

    it all stops











    GO! GO! GO! GO! GO!



    I wrote that one, not near as long though

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    • Miscue
      Super Moderator

      • Oct 2000
      • 7105

      #3
      Closed-bolt Soliloquy by Miscue -

      I have an elf, installed myself
      He helps me shoot real far

      He rides my bolt, provides a jolt
      Why is this thought bizarre?

      Supplied to me, by WGP
      He came with my new gun

      I'd like Budd Orr, to raise some more
      Give two instead of one!

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      • toyotaboy12
        e-tough

        • May 2003
        • 3663

        #4
        lol nice miscue
        I knew not what I did but am now edumacated

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