Some improvements...
1- Give her a neck
2- Lower the shoulders and give it a more feminine shape to it.
As it stands right now, she looks like a offensive lineman with long hair IMO.
But it's not a bad drawing, you just need to work on getting things in proportion. What used to help me (I don't really draw anymore) is using previously drawn parts (ex: mask) in order to see how big and WHERE the other things should start. Like in the picture you'll see her right shoulder begins near the vents on the invision. That oughta help you make sure you keep them low.
1- Give her a neck
2- Lower the shoulders and give it a more feminine shape to it.
As it stands right now, she looks like a offensive lineman with long hair IMO.
But it's not a bad drawing, you just need to work on getting things in proportion. What used to help me (I don't really draw anymore) is using previously drawn parts (ex: mask) in order to see how big and WHERE the other things should start. Like in the picture you'll see her right shoulder begins near the vents on the invision. That oughta help you make sure you keep them low.

Maybe i could get like 10 for it chahcacha.... I could buy it from my self

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