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[TheAngryDrunkenRussian]

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check it out guys and tell me what you think

[frop]

She's got fat thighs.

[Kai]

You need to work on your anatomy. Draw from life more often.

You need to work on your lines. They lack confidence never change weight.

You need to work on... Well... A lot of things. I am guessing you are still young. Just keep at it.

[quik]

lady's got ghetto thighs.

[anomoly40]

I like them thick!!!
But seriously I think the wings are to low on her back.
Her top looks funny(unless she has 3 boobs, one under each arm and one centered on the chest).
The top of her belly plate sticks out too far, or her torso is long.
Her hands look odd resting on her sword.

Remember these are only suggestions to different people's taste in art. Just because we say something is wrong with it doesn't mean it isn't a good drawing.
I got to say, It's 10x better than anything I've ever drawn.
Keep it up.

[DWill]

Its 100x better than anything I could do. I agree with the guy on top of me, art is about being unique and induvidual. So do what you think is right and your art will always be good.

[Glickman]

Excuse the choppyness, i did it in paint




that looks 1000x better. really is a good drawing, just didnt like the thunder thighs, but thats just me


its an original idea for a paladin

[DWill]

Her hands look odd resting on her sword.

Looks like they are on the crossguard (or is the word hilt?).

Edit: I guess I do see now that I look at it, something is off but I can't place it. Proportions maybe?

[anomoly40]

Oposable thumbs! Thats it! She's missing oposable thumbs! I'd make her fingers longer and wrap around the hilt. Although I'd screw it up accidently and make it look something like this.
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[Glickman]

Oposable thumbs! Thats it! She's missing oposable thumbs! I'd make her fingers longer and wrap around the hilt. Although I'd screw it up accidently and make it look something like this.
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honestly i didnt think it was funny...



till i looked at the window

[TheAngryDrunkenRussian]

sry forget to metion this I think I was wasted when I put it up.
and not to make excuses either

the drawing is not finished not nearly and plus it more a less a rough draft not a final, reasoning for the thunder thighs that I wanted to make her look strong but every strong person has their down days, second long torso I wanted her to look talker than the average woman.

Yes the wings apear to be low on her back which then should be moved up and looking at it more now she does need longer fingers

zBut heck this is a "I got bored at denny's" drawing total time drawing ti was like about 2 hrs

[Kai]

sry forget to metion this I think I was wasted when I put it up.
and not to make excuses either

the drawing is not finished not nearly and plus it more a less a rough draft not a final, reasoning for the thunder thighs that I wanted to make her look strong but every strong person has their down days, second long torso I wanted her to look talker than the average woman.

Yes the wings apear to be low on her back which then should be moved up and looking at it more now she does need longer fingers

zBut heck this is a "I got bored at denny's" drawing total time drawing ti was like about 2 hrs

Are you serious? Two hours?

[behemoth]

Are you serious? Two hours?

lol

[TheAngryDrunkenRussian]

yes serious just started listening to the blackhawk down soundtrack on the mp3 playa. I 'd didn't sit there for half a day drinking coffee.

[Kai]

Seriously, a drawing like that should have taken you about 10 minutes, tops.