For the families of the service men and women

Dye Angel Guy

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For the families of the service men and women

03-03-2006, 10:07 AM

This is dedicated to all the families of the U.S. service men and women.

Disbelief

The chair rocks
The floor creeks
The arms are grasped

The chair rocks
The floor creeks
Her teeth clinch

The chair rocks
The floor creeks
A car pulls up

The chair does not rock
The floor does not creek
The doors open

She stands up
The floor creeks
Two men get out

She falls to her knees
The floor creeks
A flag is presented

Copyright 2006, Michael Bando <---That's me

Last edited by Dye Angel Guy; 03-03-2006, 11:06 AM.

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03-06-2006, 01:58 AM

sorry I got no feeling whatsoever in this poem.

Not to be negative or anything but try again.
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Dye Angel Guy

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03-06-2006, 10:11 AM

that's cool

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