The first of many NorCal AO Day 5 threads

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  • sps16
    Now With Sprinkles
    • May 2003
    • 1558

    #61
    indeed, what is with your infatuation with getting a better grade then i? mr graham won't be able to grade them, i never got a grade with the essay i wrote last year 1st quarter

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    • Steelrat
      I meant to...uh, nevermind
      • May 2003
      • 5375

      #62
      I think killing a kid kind of ruins it. I would think that having the main character and his girlfiend being the victims might work better. A little cliche, but the death of kids creates a kind of moral crisis in some people. You go to great lengths to make the main characters sympathetic (death of mom, taking kid to the ball game) then off them. This story made me upset, rather than frightened.

      I think the trick is to create characters that the reader neither likes or dislikes. If they like them, they get angry when they die, not scared. And if they hate them, they cheer when they die. If they have neutral feelings towards them, then the attention shifts from anger/glee over the death of the character to the horror of what befalls the victim.

      Thats just my take, at least.


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      • LittlePaintballBoy

        #63
        I could probably read that in like 30 seconds, but i dont read long things on the internet. Print it out and give it to me at AO5

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        • Steelrat
          I meant to...uh, nevermind
          • May 2003
          • 5375

          #64
          Okay, last attempt:

          Connor or Brian, are you guys playing at Extreme this weekend? If so, I would like to join you. If not Im going to venture or Thunder Valley.

          Also, I think AO day 5 on November 1 or 2 might be good. What say the group?


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          • Z-man
            You guys lost me
            • Jul 2001
            • 2202

            #65
            I say yes if I can get PK to hurry. I guess I say yes even if not.

            Is the 1st is a Saturday, and I need to crash at someones house, is a friday night bad? that might be a consideration.


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            • Aegis
              To old for this
              • Dec 2002
              • 596

              #66
              Ryan - Connor and I are helping to host my mother-in-law's 80th birthday party on Sunday. If you are anywhere near Sacramento or Folsom on sunday and you see a bunch of Cadillacs coming your way, hit the shoulder. It might be our guests.

              Saturday is a wedding, also no go. That would be great to have you come our way, though, let's try that some other time.
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              • Steelrat
                I meant to...uh, nevermind
                • May 2003
                • 5375

                #67
                Well, phooey on you all! I guess I'm flying solo this weekend

                Brian, I loved that old school steel rat picture you posted. Long live slippery Jim!


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                • jr119us
                  aka: Michaelangelo
                  • Sep 2003
                  • 78

                  #68
                  If all goes well I shall be able to play this time, havent played in...too long

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                  • ZAust
                    the righteous, the weeping
                    • May 2003
                    • 1806

                    #69
                    jeff.. you down for next sunday?
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                    • jr119us
                      aka: Michaelangelo
                      • Sep 2003
                      • 78

                      #70
                      no can do...church

                      saturdays are my best bets

                      best of all i dont have to pay for paint since you owe me so much!

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                      • ZAust
                        the righteous, the weeping
                        • May 2003
                        • 1806

                        #71
                        hmm.. eric didnt have a problem with it.
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                        • Mighty Mike
                          Too Fast Too Furious
                          • Feb 2003
                          • 661

                          #72
                          November 1st or 2nd works best for me in regards to the next AO Day. I still need to test out my my E-blade in a live game.

                          BTW, here's an Atkins update: It's been 2 months and 1 week that i've been on this diet and I've lost 40lbs of chub. So on this upcoming AO Day #5, expect to see me running to the 50 in the first 5 games..

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                          • Steelrat
                            I meant to...uh, nevermind
                            • May 2003
                            • 5375

                            #73
                            Okay, I'm leaning towards Sunday, November 2nd, for the next AO day. Any objections to this?

                            We also have to decide on the field. The suggestions right now are Extreme, WAP, and Valley Thunder. I talked withe Nachos, and he told me that Valley Thunder should have a 5000 PSI compressor on-line by the end of the month.


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                            • Z-man
                              You guys lost me
                              • Jul 2001
                              • 2202

                              #74
                              Gaaa! check your email and your PMs! How am I suppoesed to reach you! AIM AIM AIM or email! chop chop! (no not chuff)


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                              • sps16
                                Now With Sprinkles
                                • May 2003
                                • 1558

                                #75
                                would it be possible to do it on saturday?

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