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[rkjunior303]

i'd like some constructive criticism..

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Aside from putting buildings and the team name mass destruction, it may come off a little sensative to people. But other than that it looks good, did you make it?

[WingMan13]

I would like to see a little more destruction on those buildings, its kinda hard to see. I like it!

[turbo chicken]

where's the destruction ... i say put an a-bomb cloud in there!!!

[tech-chan]

Heck ya.

[Patron God of Pirates]

Too complex. As a rule of thumb with logos, simpler is better. When doing a logo try to think of all the possible applications. How will it look on a jersey? How will it look in print? How will it look on the side of a bus? (if you get your own bus... you know... or plane... you never know )

Also consider how big your original image is compared to how large it will need to be printed. If the size you posted here is the full image size, it will look like a mess of pixels when blown up on the back of a jersey. If you have the applications to do so, consider creating something vector rather than raster based. Vector artwork is much more flexible in terms of being resized or modified for various media.

I do like the idea. My advice would be to think about how to covey the concept so that it can be read and understood by a bystander while you streak by on your way to the 50.

-Patron

[Zneaky]

First impression,

I saw Mass Destruction, I saw buildings, I thought 9-11. I looked through the buildings to see if the was a correlation; I found none.

I think it is risky, especially considering what the guy before me said. What if you make it small for application. Then, people see "Twin Towers" that aren't really there.

Just my impression.

Z

[paintballfiend]

Yeah, you can't really see the destruction.

[neppo1345]

May I suggest turning the skyline into a silhouette

Here, I threw this together real quick:



Skyline silhoutte would need cleaned up, as well as the atomic explosion, but I didn't feel like taking the time to do it.

[rkjunior303]

neppo - go make me one in vector! lol

[Chaos_Theory!]

People need to get over the very VERY slight tie it looks to have to 911. Just because there are crumbling buildings and the teams name is mass destruction shouldnt be looked down upon. Its not like they are terrorists, so people need to grow up.

Anyway, it is to complex and its hard to see the damaged buildings.

[don miguel]

i'd like some constructive criticism..

very nice, looks really 80's like this:

not that I like king diamond alot, thier okay though. The singer sounds like he was kicked in the bawlz really hard.
BTW is your team playing NEPL this year? we are going to. If you are, what division?

[mag_lover05]

don...just stop posting.


now, i would suggest putting a mushroom cloud in the middle of those buildings so it looks like an a-bomb went off....that is the king of mass destruction

[don miguel]

don...just stop posting.

the only way is to ban me, but I didn't do anything wrong. I just complimented his idea.

[rkjunior303]

new update.

http://rkjunior.fallingaway.com/gallery/pictures/MAssD2.gif