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  • Kai

    #16
    Okay...

    The way the image quality differs in certain spots makes it look like you just took a couple different pictures and combined them. Quality needs to be uniform, or things will look very unprofessional.

    The perspective on the horns is a little off. The one on the right is too large, and the positioning is off. You wouldn't see the bottom of it, because it would vanish behind the 'head'.

    If it's cleaned up a bit, and you learn a little more about typography, it could be a really nice logo.

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    • RetroEclipseMan
      AO's Future Game Artist
      • Jun 2002
      • 1386

      #17
      Originally posted by Kai
      Okay...

      The way the image quality differs in certain spots makes it look like you just took a couple different pictures and combined them. Quality needs to be uniform, or things will look very unprofessional.

      The perspective on the horns is a little off. The one on the right is too large, and the positioning is off. You wouldn't see the bottom of it, because it would vanish behind the 'head'.

      If it's cleaned up a bit, and you learn a little more about typography, it could be a really nice logo.
      That's exactly what i was thinking. To me it looks like the devil image was cut out of another photo because of the sloppy selection around the ear where some green pixels were left. i'm not saying you stole it but like others have said it does look very similar to other logos out there. maybe going with something more unique than a paintball with a face.maybe design a midget devil pointing a paintball gun at the viewer (maybe more of 3/4) would be cool. i duuno, just experiment with different things. i know when i'm concepting designs for things i rarely stick with my original design.

      If you experiment with the font a bit to try and make it a bit more bold and stand out froom the background i think it'd be a successful logo. good luck
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      • Bluestrike_2
        Archer
        • Jan 2004
        • 481

        #18
        Never use the basic fonts that come with your OS. Well, maybe not never, but not often. Download them, such as at Acid Fonts etc., or make your own.
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        • bunker17
          Registered User
          • Apr 2004
          • 440

          #19
          just wanting to know how do i mak emy own fonts and any link to where i can download new ones? Besides that what do you think if i make a body and use that has the face ???
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          • sps16
            Now With Sprinkles
            • May 2003
            • 1558

            #20
            Archive of freely downloadable fonts. Browse by alphabetical listing, by style, by author or by popularity.

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