Songs I wrote... Let me know what you think...

[MayAMonkeyBeYourPinata]

holy crap pinata... and all the songs up there i actually have a tune for in my head haha... and i do mix up the rhyme scheme alot... well sorta, thanks for the comment

Thanks, I think...

[Echo419]

yah dude... there awesome... Thats more poetic IMO... i write some stuff like that, but i dont consider it songs so i dont really type them up as songs... but i can sit in my head and come up with something like that, with no rhyme schemes at all...

Sorta like Jim Morrison when he is describing something, and uses no rhyming but rather highly poetic free verse

[MayAMonkeyBeYourPinata]

I find it much easier to write when you have a tune in your head, alot of times I will steal a simple beat from a song, and use that to shape my writing.

[Echo419]

Thats kinda what mine are... mine are all fast paced... Streetlight Manifesto is where most my tunes come from.

[Jonneh]

Write a song about a happy go lucky duck over the moon because he's just bought the 24 DVD boxset and can't wait to see Jack Bauer torture someone then threaten to kill their loved ones in eye poppingly high sound and picture quality.

[Echo419]

dude I want the 24 DVD Box Set...

[Athius]

They are good but the bad thing is that people will get tired of them since most of them you are crying because a girl left you.

[psychoreaper_666]

i'm really NOT into emo
but some of its pretty good

but seriously did you have to get so worked up over a girl leaving you that you felt the need to write 7 songs about it. I mean really, if your that worked up you need help. life will go on.


BTW black/ thrash metal helps to releive anger better than emo

[Echo419]

Hmm... actually not all 7 are about a girl leaving? maybe 3? other are about my leaving her? others are just not about leaving at all?

[Automaggot68]

Umm do you mean MySpace? and That was a useless post... you couldve posted that comment in myspace, but u didnt. kthx

I didn't like them, and i wish you'd stop posting.

Edit: ANGSSSSSSSSSST

[Echo419]

ANOTHER SONG

Today they came to me, and let me know
That it was time for me to go
They said, "Make today well spent, It will be your last.
Time to put this town in the past."

I'm Gone...
No more time with you
I'm Gone...
No more holding you
I'm Gone...
No more endless nights kissing you
I'm Gone...

Tonight I'll go home, sleep, and dream
of my life, empty without you it seems.
Without delay, my dream becomes a nightmare,
Simply without you, out there.

Don't leave me, when I leave you
I will always be there with you
If your with me...

It seems it always happens this way
Find someone you need to love and lean on
Then without fail their taken away

I'm Gone...
No more you
I'm Gone...
No more me
I'm Gone...
No more time spent bieng lonely
I'm Gone...

Tonight I'll go home and I'll wish
That is wasn't our last kiss.
Of all these things I'll be without
your the only one that will figure out
That your the only one i'll miss.

This Morning I... Drove away from this
Dieng inside ever since.
I passed you by on my way
What could I do but cry and wave

It ends this way, It will be our last.
Oh... It ends this way...
Your in my past...